Jose Rizal M. Reyes
1 min readDec 30, 2016

214. On Celebrating Death and Defeat

We celebrate our heroes’ martyrdom,
Especially that of Jose Rizal.
We don’t deem it to be inimical
To glorify defeats. So stunned I am.

My viewpoint surely is not whimsical:
This practice is so dumb and so bizarre.
Where did this way of celebrating come?
I truly find it quite irrational!

I guess this practice emanated from
Christ’s passion and his death in Calvary.
But instead of the Fall of Bataan,
Can we not celebrate success in war?
A good example is that of Mactan
When Lapu Lapu scored a victory.

Jose Rizal M. Reyes
November 7, 2007G

rhyming pattern: abba bcab adeced
rhyme scheme model: Frederick Goddard Tuckerman’s Sonnet XXVIII
sonnet format: quatrain, quatrain, sextet (Italian/Sicilian)

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Jose Rizal M. Reyes
Jose Rizal M. Reyes

Written by Jose Rizal M. Reyes

Jose is a poet-philosopher. He writes poems and essays. He is best known as the inventor of many new sonnet rhyme schemes being used today around the world.

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